Feedback from rough cut ( secret shadows)

Pros

• good variety of shots
• Good opening credits
• Establishment of location
• effective storyline
• Good understanding of thriller genre
• Nice sense of ambience through heavy breathing

Cons

• Not a rough cut
• Music needs to be tidied up and some bits need to be louder

katie-guess what
jaelle-what
katie-josh so likes you
jaelle-no he doesnt
katie-yes he does
jaelle-no he doesnt i saw him looking at you
katie-no defo you
jaelle-he did say hi the other day
katie-see i told you
jaelle-well what should i do?
katie- well you could...
jaelle- you hear that?
katie-no what is it?
jaelle- its the ....
katie & jaelle - coco pop transmiter

Shot list and story board

Props Needed and genre/certificate for film

Props
-Nail varnish
-Head Sets
-costumes for ''super heros'' e.g. capes
-Coco Pops
- make-up

Genre and certificate:
U - because there wont be any swearing or any violence. It will all be funny and easy to understand for younger people.

Story Board ideas

Places to film

Here we have the refectory where we could film them in a ''cafe'' painting there nails just before they have to rush of.

Here we have the costa bit where you can get coffee this is the other place which would fit in with were we could film them drinking and eating while painting nails

Classification of ''PG''

‘PG’

Parental Guidance

General viewing, but some scenes may be unsuitable for young children

Unaccompanied children of any age may watch. A ‘PG’ film should not disturb a child aged around eight or older. However, parents are advised to consider whether the content may upset younger or more sensitive children.

Discrimination

Discriminatory language or behaviour is unlikely to be acceptable unless clearly disapproved of or in an educational or historical context. Discrimination by a character with which children can readily identify is unlikely to be acceptable.

Drugs

References to illegal drugs or drug misuse must be innocuous or carry a suitable anti-drug message.

Horror

Frightening sequences should not be prolonged or intense. Fantasy settings may be a mitigating factor.

Imitable behaviour

No detail of potentially dangerous behaviour which young children are likely to copy. No glamorisation of realistic or easily accessible weapons.

Language

Mild bad language only.

Nudity

Natural nudity, with no sexual context.

Sex

Sexual activity may be implied, but should be discreet and infrequent. Mild sex references and innuendo only.

Theme

Where more serious issues are featured (for example, domestic violence) nothing in their treatment should condone unacceptable behaviour.

Violence

Moderate violence, without detail, may be allowed, if justified by its context (for example, history, comedy or fantasy).